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Antonio
Hello, Does anyone have any props, sets, characters that would fit this short?
Just add a comment and use the file attachment.
Just write in the comment, where you got it, and the name of the author.
Antonio
INT. Doctors Office, a Couple in their nineties are both having problems remembering things. They face their doctor...
OVER THE SHOULDER:Between the older couple, truck in slowly.
The doctor is speaking with his hands, Like an Italian. He is sitting at his desk.
DOCTOR:
You are both physically okay, but you might want to start writing things down to help remember them.
old couple
Old Couple sitting in 2 chairs, Nod in unison.
INT. COUPLES LIVING ROOM IN THEIR HOME. NIGHT TIME. He is watching tv and she is reading. The man looks at his wife.
CLOSE UP:Old man.
While watching TV, the old man gets up from his chair.
Old man
Want anything while I'm in the kitchen?
close up: woman at the table reading.
Old Woman
Will you get me a bowl of ice cream?
close up: man.
OLD MAN
Sure.
The old man turns and starts to walk to the kitchen.
close up:woman.
OLD WOMAN
Don't you think you should write it down so you can remember it?
Close up:man.
The man looks at the notepad on the table.
Close UP:notepad. hold a Beat.
Close up:man.
OLD MAN
No, I can remember it.
OLD WOMAN
CLOSE UP:
Well, I'd like some strawberries on top, too. Maybe you should write it down, so's not to forget it?
OLD MAN
I can remember that. You want a bowl of ice cream with strawberries. '
Turns again and starts walking to the kitchen.
OLD WOMAN
I'd also like whipped cream. I'm certain you'll forget that, write it down?'
OLD MAN
cringes, without turning around, waving his left arm up and speaking in an irritated voice,
I don't need to write it down, I can remember it! Ice cream with strawberries and whipped cream - I got it, for goodness sake!
Then he toddles into the kitchen.
Opens the fridge.
Fade to old woman reading. Voice over Sound effects of a man taking a plate from the cupboard. Old woman moves her head a little, reading more.
Shot of the door to the kitchen. Shuffling can be heard and sizzling bacon.
Cut to The old man filling the door of the kitchen, with a plate of bacon and eggs in his hand. He walks over and puts it next to his wife on the table.
CLOSE UP:old woman's face thinking.
The old woman stares at the plate for a moment, and then looks up.
OLD WOMAN
Where's my toast?
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